3 strengths and weaknesses of certain articles

The role of Writing in Political Science 
Strengths 
1. He cites all of his info and course knowledge. 
2. He sticks to APA format, especially all the headers including page numbers. 
3. He puts articles or specific journals into italics. 
weaknesses 
1. He started out with a direct quote. I don't find that to be a very professional way of opening up a paragraph or even a article/journal. 
2. Ends conclusion with a quote. 
3. Uses a large quote but didn't put that into a block paragraph. 


Writing in Psychology 
Strengths 
1. Goes in depth with a lot of research. 
2. has good structure 
3.  knows the topic very well 
Weaknesses 
1. Starts of intro with a very short ended sentence. 
2. Doesn't block quotes, or doesn't cite some of the quotes as well 
3.  didn't italic a article


Writing as a Creative Writer 
Strengths 
1. uses a title page, also 
2. good grammar and structure like headers and page numbers. 
3. he uses italics to lay out the articles or journals he is using. 
Weaknesses 
1. he doesn't center two of his headers for a paragraph. 
2. doesn't go into depth about some of his quotes like where he actually pulled that quote from 
3. feel like they could've elaborated a little bit more on the conclusion, gone into specific detail. 


Writing in the Field of Economics 
Strengths 
1. uses a header and page numbers 
2. uses italics to describe the articles and journals 
3. uses a block paragraph for large quotes. 
Weaknesses 
1. Starts off with a question in his introductory paragraph. 
2. doesn't use quotes right in the paragraph. 
3. doesn't cite the quote right either. 


The Role of Writing in Engineering 
Strengths 
1. Using the right structure for APA
2. has a title page 
3. italic/ using quotes very well 
Weaknesses 
1. Starts out with a very large quote in the beginning of the article. 
2. doesn't introduce paragraphs very well 
3. very short conclusion was expecting to capitalize on all of what he discussed. 


Writing in the Business Discipline 
Strengths 
1. uses a lot of recourses to dicus what he is talking about. 
2.
3. 
Weaknesses 
1. started out with the quote at the beginning 
2. kind of argues his point with emails at the start when an academic paper is too not debate.
3. doesn't put his titles of paragraphs into the direct center alignment 

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