Introduction and Method
Introduction
Sleep deprivation
is the condition of not having enough sleep, sleep is one of the most important
factors in your everyday life. Sleep plays a huge role in your mental and physical
health, if you don’t get enough sleep it can be very dangerous. Now as a student
at a university I decided to conduct a survey on how sleep deprivation can have
a toll on academic success. I chose the topic considering the personal ties I
have with the certain issue, also it would help to realize how important the issue
is among college students and their academics. In one article called College Students: getting enough sleep is
vital to academic success the author makes sure to explain that even the
shortest amount of sleep can result in something terrifying, “After two weeks
of sleeping six hours or less a night, students feel as bad and preform as
poorly as someone who has gone without sleep for 48 hours.” (AASM, Dr. Epstein).
In college a lot of us might fall into the category of people who don’t get enough
sleep do to homework that needs to be finished or even the exam that we didn’t truly
study for in advanced. Sleep deprivation is a wide topic that can be spread through
many ideas like academic progress, but what does everyone know about it right
now?
“Sleep loss alters normal functioning of attention and disrupts
the ability to focus on environmental sensory input” (Davis). Sleep deprivation
is no question very dangerous according to many medical personal and even just to
the public. The real question I’m trying to answer is how does being sleep deprived
effect your academic success? Well Dr. Kushida from the article College Students: getting enough sleep is
vital to academic success collaborates that, “College students who pull “all-nighters”
are more likely to have a lower GPA” (AASM, Kushida). This means that someone who
doesn’t get enough sleep to function which is typically 8 hours a night, has
the chance of obtaining a lower GPA due to being tired daily. Also, we know
from a different article titled SLEEP ROCKS!
GET MORE OF IT! “1 in 4 UGA students indicate that lack of sleep has
impacted their academic performance in a negative way.” (University of Georgia).
Sleep deprivation or not getting enough sleep a night leads to an increase in
mental health issues.
Since sleep deprivation has been studied and tested for
years the topic has really been discussed over and over, which means that everything
within the topic is solid. There isn’t truly anything in the topic of sleep
deprivation versus academic success that hasn’t been discussed already. By
using the research, I have already collected from many different sources, I am
able to suggest why my survey will come back with results I have already been
clear about.
Methods
Participants
For this experiment I sampled 30 random University of
Iowa students. These students are both male and female, their grades range from
freshman too seniors. From a lot of the research I’ve been conducting it’s overwhelming
how many people have answered yes to the question of “Are you sleep deprived?”.
The participants of this experiment are in no way a biased sample, these
subjects were chosen randomly from an email sent around campus.
When using quotes and citing them it seems that at times you are trying to incorporate them into existing sentences that are already long and can turn them into run on sentences with the addition of the quote. I also wouldn't start paragraphs with quotes because it doesn't give the reader time to understand what you are jumping into.
ReplyDeleteYou might have to find some gap within the research or this paper is going to be very hard to write and less fun than usual to write. You also kind of already proved your question with previous research in your second paragraph of the introduction.
I would add more to your methods so that the reader is able to get a better background on how the research was performed. This better understanding by the reader of the research will also help them in following along when you mention the gap within the research. Add the procedure and data analysis portion to your methods section.